高中英語作文滿分賞析

　　以下是小編為大家整理的一篇高中英語作文滿分賞析，歡迎閱讀。

　　一

　　假設(shè)你叫王明，昨天收到了筆友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京來學習中文。他想了解如何學好中文。請你用英文給他回復一封e-mail，介紹學習中文的體會和方法，提出你的建議，以及表達你幫助他學好中文的愿望。

　　Dear David,

　　I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.

　　Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

　　Yours,

　　Wang Ming

　　二

　　假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”�，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：

　　1、 自我介紹;2、 祝賀蘇琳生日;3、 感謝工作人員;4、 索取蘇琳三歲生日照。

　　注意：

　　1、詞數(shù)100左右;2、可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3、開頭語已為你寫好。

　　例文：

　　Dear Sir/Madam,

　　Greetings from China!

　　I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

　　By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　【名師點評】

　　本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點如下：1.自我介紹;2.信息來源;3.祝賀生日;4.感謝照顧;5.索取照片;6.合適的結(jié)尾。這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語均表達到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的'感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長短句運用合理，結(jié)合了簡單句和復合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞

　　1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快樂的 2.express v.表達 3.give birth to v.產(chǎn)生，生育

　　好句

　　I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

　　我祝福它生日快樂并且對你們的辛勤工作表達我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。

　　評析：定語從句的使用。

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