英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文真題范文
下面是英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文真題的范文和點(diǎn)評(píng)，有關(guān)央視春晚的話題，一起來(lái)看看吧。
2006年12月真題
Directions: For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Spring Festival Gala. You should write at least 120 words following the outline liven below:
1.許多人喜歡在除夕觀看春節(jié)晚會(huì)
2.有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會(huì)
3.我的看法
Spring Festival Gala on CCTV
As regards the Spring Festival Gala there has been a heated discussion among the general in public in our society. People who believe in-its necessity argue that the Spring Festival Gala performed on CCTV on New Year's Eve presenting grand sight and sound has already been considered as an indispensable custom by many Chinese people.
By contrast，others hold that the 4-hour show is gradually losing its appeal and should he cancelled. The past two decades has witnessed a steady decrease in the number of people watching the Spring Festival Gala from 943 , 500 , 000 to 728 , 500 , 000.With the roaring development of economy，various mass media come out like bamboo shoots after spring rain，making it increasingly difficult to cater to all tastes.
As far as I am concerned，I prefer the program to stay. Served as an occasion for families to get together, the Spring Festival Gala is a tradition and treasure of the Chinese people.(153詞)
“一句話”點(diǎn)評(píng)
毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，第二段中的兩個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)將首先吸引閱卷老師的眼球，同時(shí)該句還使用了decade , witness , steady等亮點(diǎn)詞和watching分詞短語(yǔ)做后置定語(yǔ)，這將給閱卷老師留下良好的'第一印象。應(yīng)該注意的是:比較對(duì)照型的第一段往往已經(jīng)有了一個(gè)比較長(zhǎng)的模板句，所以建議將“一句話”放在第二段。
快捷構(gòu)思
從本范文三段之間的篇幅對(duì)比和畫線部分模板詞句來(lái)看，比較對(duì)照型的整篇構(gòu)思清晰明了。而且，除第一段第一句為模板句引人話題外，其他段落首句皆為段落中心句(即題目所給提綱)，第一段第二句前半句緊跟其后的為段落中心，完全符合“黃金3原則”的謀篇原則。
第一段:在模板句引人話題后接著提出首段中心“有些人喜歡(認(rèn)為有必要舉行)春節(jié)晚會(huì)”，并用presenting grand sight and sound和be considered as an indispensable custom by many Chinese people兩個(gè)原因來(lái)支持段落中心。
第二段:開門見山展現(xiàn)段落中心“也有些人提出要取消春節(jié)晚會(huì)”。而后“一句話”數(shù)例為具體現(xiàn)象展示，說(shuō)明越來(lái)越多的人不喜歡了。最后呈現(xiàn)人們不喜歡的原因:媒體暴增，晚會(huì)不能滿足人們的各種[l味了。
第三段:直接展現(xiàn)自己的觀點(diǎn)，并簡(jiǎn)要提出一個(gè)原因，不做更深層次的展開。
美麗詞句
(1) presenting grand sight and sound展現(xiàn)美好的視聽盛宴
(2)indispensable不可缺少的(優(yōu)于necessary , important等表達(dá))
(3)lose its appeal失去吸引力(如要表達(dá)“對(duì)……有吸引力”則用sth. appeal to sb.)
(4)come out like bamboo shoots after spring rain像雨后春筍般呈現(xiàn)出來(lái)
(5)increasingly逐漸地，越來(lái)越……(優(yōu)于全國(guó)人民都習(xí)慣使用的more and more )
(6)cater to all tastes滿足各種日味
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