高考真題英語(yǔ)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)
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【試題回放】
假如你是李華,美國(guó)一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物,該校格林先生來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給她寫(xiě)封回信,假如你是李華,美國(guó)一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物,該校格林先生來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給她寫(xiě)封回信,主要內(nèi)容如下:
1、表示贊成。
2、提出你喜歡的欄目。
3、簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由。
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右。
2. 新的.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好。
3. 適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
4. 參考欄目:欄目—column
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
這是一篇滿(mǎn)分作文。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn),導(dǎo)致了安徽省今年的英語(yǔ)作文分?jǐn)?shù)普遍偏低。仔細(xì)分析了這篇文章,寫(xiě)的的確是好,很地道的美式英語(yǔ),一些詞語(yǔ)的大膽使用,讓人不得不猜測(cè)此人或者是家人可能有過(guò)國(guó)外生活的經(jīng)歷,否則這么地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的英語(yǔ),可不是一朝一夕所能寫(xiě)出來(lái)的。
比如說(shuō):my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運(yùn)用,list, can't wait to 簡(jiǎn)直是perfect! 況且文章中沒(méi)有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤,不管是書(shū)寫(xiě)還是語(yǔ)法。英語(yǔ)能夠?qū)W到這種程度,不可謂不讓人佩服。
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